hazel eyes

[Inkmoon]

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Ok then here is the improved ersion of "the souls mirror" I was to do....
Whaddya think??? did it get better????

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The size of the pupil and iris look better this time around, but the picture looks a bit rushed. D= The shape of the eyes look kinda lumpy and the eyelashes still look iffy. Oh! And don't forget that the shine can go over the iris too, but it's placement really depends on where your light source is. =)

Hope that helped!

[Inkmoon]

The size of the pupil and iris look better this time around, but the picture looks a bit rushed. D= The shape of the eyes look kinda lumpy and the eyelashes still look iffy. Oh! And don't forget that the shine can go over the iris too, but it's placement really depends on where your light source is. =)

Hope that helped!

Oh... Thanks!!! It might be because I was copying from a picture and I broke my glasses so I couldn't see very well. But how should you do the eye form the???

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